11. Is there anything that may confuse the reader unnecessarily? How might the confusing passage be clarified?
Due to the fact that it's important for the reader NOT to be confused while reading my essay I believe that this is an important questions. I believe I wasn't clear enough in essay 4, regarding my reference to childhood attachments. Also, I must clarify exactly what the item I'm referring to symbolizes. With some work on those two subjects as a start, I feel the essay will be an easier read for my audience.
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