I've decided that I am going to be revising Essay 1, despite the fact that I had a difficult time deciding what to write about until just about the last minute. Overall, I enjoyed writing Essay 1 more so than Essay 2, and since I believe writing should be enjoyable I've decided to continue to work on it.
Although my second essay was truthful, I felt I was able to express myself more in Essay 1. More of my personality shines through with the first essay as well as the idea that I have more ability to elaborate on the topic of discussion.
I’m looking forward to revising and continuing my writing for the essay!
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