I never thought I would somewhat successfully complete my first draft. It took me a while to come up with a subject when little did I realize it was something so personal, right in front of me.
Overall I think my essay went well. It was personal and witty. Something I’d like to work on is showing more of my personal progression; maturing while spending my money, learning spending limits, returning to work as an adult and no longer the child.
I want my next essay to be clever, but personal and funny as well, however, I haven’t decided on a topic yet. I think my main focus is to write on the organization of my writing.
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